Friday, 4 September 2009

My snail poem

This is my shape poem

I am a snail that is slippery and soft.
I like to scare people when my head goes pop.
When I am old people throw me away.
I have a hard shell and small antennas.
slippery, slithery, sticky, oozy, gooey, icky.

Punn 3W


  1. Lovely and funny poem, well done Punn!
    I wish Mr. Ben would ask the kids to do in a rapper style sometimes. It could be another fun rhyme as well.

    Pat M.

  2. this helps me a lot for my homework getting a little sneaky


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